"Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion."

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have different views about the manners of dealing with adverse situations. While learning to compromise and adapt to the surroundings is better than struggling to get even worse situations, I firmly believe that most of the time, we still have a chance to improve for the better to a large extent, which would do more good than harm. On the one hand, it is brave to face unexpected difficulties because we do not have enough power to predict what will happen to us as human beings.
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,
people
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lost their jobs due to the recent two-year epidemic. It happened suddenly without any psychological preparation, let alone working out the solutions. We shall accept it under
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circumstance, replan the living cost and prepare for even worse situations.
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, getting along with the negativeness realistically is a necessary life skill.
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, there is no doubt that
people
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always have opportunities to get things better. Without putting in our efforts, we have no hope of realising our potential. "Tomorrow is another day", which means we shall keep our hopes as always. For the same example,
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may lose their jobs even if it is not their fault, but they shall continue seeking a new one and learning new skills, find out what is their strengths and weakness to get ready for any opportunity.
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, we would get things better sooner or later.
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,
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we can not control everything, we can rise above personal difficulties to help ourselves get out of a bad situation. In conclusion, I believe that
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shall take what happened, whether good or bad,
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of emotionally steering away from it.
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, apart from the acceptance, we could do better than our expectations, hardly can we find that a successful man is straightforward to give up in their lives, as they all convinced that failures open up opportunities for improvement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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