In many parts of the world, people now often throw things away when they are broken and buy new ones, whereas in the past broken things were repaired and used again. Why do you think this is the case? What problems may it lead to?

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Different
people
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have different approaches to life. Across the globe, folks are now discarding things
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when they are damaged,
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, prefer to replace
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of repairing as compared to
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reasons responsible for
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of them along with the issues it can give rise to.
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with, the primary factor could be the easy availability of items. Nowadays,
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have flexible access to shopping
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as online with lots of variety to choose
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terms of price and quality.
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, China has made almost everything at a cheaper cost which
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previously available only
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branded labels.
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, the repairing cost is
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higher than to replace.
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, while some
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are nowadays quite lazy to visit repairing
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others might me too occupied to get it done.
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, they find throwing away and buying a new one to be more convenient.
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, the newer generation does not have much emotional attachment with
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materialistic things as compared to the past when
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used to preserve things or valuables to pass it on to
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generations. There can be some issues related to
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as,
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, in order to meet the demands of
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the raw materials are used excessively leading to nature imbalance.
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,
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reservoir is getting depleted used in manufacturing goods.
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to
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, the use and throw policy is creating huge waste which gets accumulated as
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.
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of
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is losing the importance of reusable or recyclable goods as everything is so easily available.
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, mobile phones are now so conveniently accessible that it is more complicated and expensive to get them repaired. To conclude, development in today's world is the leading factor attributed to
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whereas in past
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use to travel miles to get some goods.Technology has brought
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revolution in
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's thinking
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and
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lifestyles
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.
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, there is some negative side of each
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while it is positive in myriad ways in terms of creating more employment and easy living.
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