The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Indubitably, being healthy and fit is considered to be

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toughest job for many individuals. It is often argued that the increasing number of obesity in humans is certainly imposing

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additional pressure on the healthcare system, and

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a few people believe that fitness must be encouraged through introducing physical training as part of

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curriculum at schools.

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the given notion. Apparently, introducing gymnastics at a young age to realize the importance of staying fit holds a wide range of constructive benefits.

To begin

with, children comprehend the importance of physical fitness at the nascent stage of their lives and if the courses are conditioned to be mandatory, they will compose practical and theoretical teaching; emphasis on theoretical training will encourage the young minds to pay attention to what they are consuming in a day, how healthy it is for them.

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, physical education classes will

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inculcate discipline to the disciples, kids will not only learn about fitness but

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implement their learnings quite strictly in their lives. To exemplify, a child who learns the repercussions of over-eating, combined with lack of exercise will train themselves to lead a healthy lifestyle for a

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On the other hand

, to argue that

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will curb the concern of rapidly growing obesity is not justified. Chiefly because, the primary cause for overweight is the increasing number of

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outlets, ignorance towards the negative implications of junk

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on health is evident with every new outlet

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introduced in the market.

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chains can definitely offer healthier alternatives to junk

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Moreover

, the lenient attitude of the government towards advertisements that probe people to buy sugary drinks and high-

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content must be reprimanded;

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be banned. The state must remind the public about the health risks posed by consuming unhealthy foods. To illustrate

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, all Indian movies display a statutory warning when they are showing a scene that involves cigarettes or alcohol, similar caution must be replicated when advertisements create hype around unhealthy

food

habits. To recapitulate, physical training must not be held solely responsible to solve the trouble of obesity, and enough attention must

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be given to inhabiting a healthy eating pattern amongst the people.