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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is considered that foreign
people
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 living in a country that needs to communicate with a non-native
language
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 will bring many
problems
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. I agree that
people
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 living in an alien land have to face some social and practical troubles to a certain extent. In social
problems
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, cultural and racial differences are vital issues that foreign
people
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 should be attentive to.
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, these issues can cause cultural conflicts.
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,
people
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 who speak different languages have a diversity of cultural or religious backgrounds.
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, if foreigners have a misunderstanding with what native
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 saying or vice versa, it might cause unavoidable conflicts due to the differences of culture or religions.
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, differences in
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 could be targeted by some evil racists. These criminal racists will treat innocent
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 with violence just because of their different skin colours. It is incredibly detrimental to each individuals safety and well-being. In practical terms, finding a decent job in a strange land would be the most significant trouble for foreign
people
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.
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, native companies are prone to employ native speakers
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 of foreigners because of understanding
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 issues.
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, it is a severe problem for an exotic
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 speaker to reach the same level of understanding as native speakers.
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, it can bring negative effects to working efficiency, communicating with colleagues and understanding working tasks.
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, it is more difficult for foreign
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 to make native friends own to
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 understanding
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;
therefore
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, they are isolated from local communities.
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, I believe that learning a
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 harder and respecting
culture
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 diversity can solve these
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. In conclusion, the foreigner should make more efforts to understand the
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language
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 to communicate better; The native should accept the diversities of languages, cultures and races, make a contribution to the peace of the big human family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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