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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Attraction on the
products
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 in the recent era is constantly on the rise by advertisement towards their consumers.
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 situation has some drawbacks and
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 has some positive aspects;
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, I incline towards my latter opinion for the reasons. All these will explore in the ensuring essay.
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 with, when a company introduces their new
products
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 through advertising,
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 the consumers concern about these new
products
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.
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, many companies like Daraz, Amazon, e-buy advertising on Facebook, YouTube, etc.
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, advertising helps to know about new
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, and it had shared information about these
products
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. Another key consideration is advertisements help to brand a product,
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 Increase the product's face value
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 as Samsung. My unknown
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 are easy to buy for ads and are available at
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 time.
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,
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 advertising is effective for
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 branding or concern about
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, it has some antisocial ads and misleading information. Sometimes some organizations show many unhealthy
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, which can create children's immune problems and obesity.
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, a recent study found that many Children’s
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 are unhygienic that they are known by advertisement.
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, many advertising companies publish misleading instructions on TV or online.
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, companies of advertising choose many social contain which are show adulteration, it is affecting our healthy generation, it seems fun adds but creates social problems. In conclusion, it must be said that problems have become complex issues with no easy solution.
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 but not least advertising helps to
products
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 branding and share instruction about
products
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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