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These days people are using the Internet for shopping, work and to communicate with others without the need for face to face meetings. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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In
contemporary
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 universe
internet
 playing a significant role in communication, work, even shopping which cause low relationship
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 to
face
 between
people
. From my point of view,
although
 there are some advantages
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this
 case, the harmful effects exceed its benefits. On one hand, in the time of prevalence of a disease,
people
 should not contact
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each other
face
 to
face
 due to its danger. In
this
 case, using
internet
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 to handle jobs, relationships and does shopping is the best way to proceed the life.
For instance
, in
prevalence
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the prevalence
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 of covid 19
people
 in all over the world have to perform whole their tasks via
internet
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the internet
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.
However
,
human
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the human
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 being is a social creature who grows up in communication with others. Having contact with other individuals assist us to maturate mentally and live on the earth, as well as, increase our spirit.
Furthermore
, doing works or tasks by using sheer
internet
 may have harmful effects. One
,
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 could be financial loss once we do shopping. If we see a commodity just
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 the
internet
 and decide to buy it, usually we give that thing with
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low qualification, because we cannot realize the quality
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 images
in
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 the
internet
.
Moreover
, at work, we need our human being’s tools to contact
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others and impress them. Our feelings and body language are some of the important tools we have to make
relationship
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 clearly
face
 to
face
. By using
internet
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the internet
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this
 kind of sense is not
certainty
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a certainty
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. In conclusion, as every coin has two sides, using
internet
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 for doing tasks in
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life or
job
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 has some pros, as well as, several cons. I think most of the relationships, shopping and work communities must accomplish by
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the presence
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 of
people
.
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