These days people are using the Internet for shopping, work and to communicate with others without the need for face to face meetings. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In the contemporary universe
internet
playing a significant role in communication, work, even shopping which cause low relationship
face
to
face
between
people
. From my point of view,
although
there are some advantages, in
this
case, the harmful effects exceed its benefits. On one hand, in the time of prevalence of a disease,
people
should not contact each other
face
to
face
due to its danger. In
this
case, using the
internet
to handle jobs, relationships and does shopping is the best way to proceed the life.
For instance
, in the prevalence of covid 19
people
in all over the world have to perform whole their tasks via the
internet
.
However
, the human being is a social creature who grows up in communication with others. Having contact with other individuals assist us to maturate mentally and live on the earth, as well as, increase our spirit.
Furthermore
, doing works or tasks by using sheer
internet
may have harmful effects. One of them could be financial loss once we do shopping. If we see a commodity just on the
internet
and decide to buy it, usually we give that thing with low qualification, because we cannot realize the quality of goods from their images on the
internet
.
Moreover
, at work, we need our human being’s tools to contact others and impress them. Our feelings and body language are some of the important tools we possess to make relationships clearly
face
to
face
. By using the
internet
this
kind of sense is not a certainty. In conclusion, as every coin has two sides, using the
internet
for doing tasks in life or a job has some pros, as well as, several cons. I think most of the relationships, shopping and work communities must accomplish by the presence of
people
.
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