Damage to environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement in the standard of living. To what degree do you agree or disagree to this position?

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People in every country are willing to have a higher standard of living under the Internet age, especially in these recent years that ordinary people are audiences of KOLs who like sharing their

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on social media.

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, it is well agreed the need for improvement can cause damage to the

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surrounding us. Throughout history, the consumption of electricity is the price of the development of human society.

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, the most significant energy nowadays - Electricity, is still mainly generated from burning fossil fuels. That leads to a large scale of mining for fuels like coal. As an example, Shanxi is a famous coal-producing province in China. The geological

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here has damaged during the 80s, so China has set about protecting the

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in Shanxi.

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there are several ideal cleaning energy like nuclear and hydro energy, the related technologies are needed to be improved.

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, petrol consumption is

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harmful to the

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. Aeroplanes and vehicles are two dominant consumers of petrol. Especially, aeroplanes employ over 80% amount of petrol burning. Due to globalization, thousands of airlines are in operation each day, offering international logistics and commute. At the same time, they are burning high-purity jet fuel. One flight from San Fransisco to New York can consume one-

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of the gasoline consumption of a family-use car's

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cycle. In recent years, EVs are coming into our daily

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. That can lower the pollution caused by vehicles. But Electric planes are still under development. In conclusion, sacrificing the

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is the outcome of the improvement of

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. But humans can reduce pollutions and control it in a reasonable range without interfering the development.

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, the coming generations will pay for our greed.

Steve Yan Wed Aug 25 2021

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Damage to environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement in the standard of living. To what degree do you agree or disagree to this position?

Your opinion

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