Without capital punishments (the health penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increases. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is believed that the

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penalty plays an important role in maintaining peace in society and lower the crime rate.

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, some people argue that people who commit crimes punishable by

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can still be reformed.

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essay agrees with the

first

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statement because fear of

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helps maintain order and there is no

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thing as

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chances for these crimes.

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with, the thing

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most important to us is our life and the fear of losing it is what stops them from doing those hideous crimes. If even just for an hour capital punishment is removed, people will start killing without any

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thought. As they are aware of the fact that they will not be hanged till

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for killing someone they hate,

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they will get a

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chance to live their lives to the fullest.

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, there is no other penalty that comes close enough to be justified for the crime they committed.

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, let's say you killed someone and our justice system believes in

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chances. So you are now required to pay like $10,00,000 to the family of the person you killed. Do you think the loved ones of that man will let him walk around freely? No, they will try to kill him.

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, the era of vigilante will begin, ruining the peace of society. To conclude, I totally agree, that some offences can only be punished by

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because no other punishment comes close to doing justice to the victim and without it, the crime rate will go through the roof.

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Without capital punishments (the health penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increases. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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