The government should lower the budget on the arts to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?

The amount of

money

that

government

allocates to each organ has always been an issue.

Education

,

on the other hand

, is another challenging topic that cannot be subsided easily and requires a great foundation.

This

statement claims that the

art

budget

should be reduced and must be added to

education

. To express my opinion, I have to say I disagree strongly. To support what I have claimed, I must point out

art

and

education

are tied to each other in some ways.

Although

the bond might not be visible to many people, not only does

art

inspire all human beings, it

also

awakens their talents and desires.

In other words

, it is not totally wrong if we assume

art

as a way of educating.

However

, when it comes to

education

most people think of it as an academic module, but it is time for all of us to broaden our horizons and include spiritual ways as well as academic ones.

For instance

, statistics show that it is added to the number of kids who choose to go to

art

school or like to be an artist in future, day by day, after attending an

art

gallery or seeing a play in the theatre.

Moreover

, the

government

spends lots of

money

on unnecessary items

such

as luxurious cars for its clerks or giving overrated benefits to some parliament members. None of these expenses

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

essential and neither the employees nor the parliament candidates need

such

advantages when

this

budget

can be allocated to more important sections. Once

government

learns how to cut less important expenses short, it can give each section enough amount of

money

without worrying about the

budget

being sufficient and enough. In conclusion, we must admit that reducing the

art

budget

and adding it to

education

is not the best solution.

Art

and

education

are not separable and once you damage one, the other is going to be affected as well. So,

instead

of that the

government

can avoid having unimportant expenses and allocate the extra

money

to more essential sections.