The government should lower the budget on the arts to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?

The amount of

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that

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allocates to each organ has always been an issue.

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,

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, is another challenging topic that cannot be subsided easily and requires a great foundation.

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statement claims that the

art

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budget

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should be reduced and must be added to

education

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. To express my opinion, I have to say I disagree strongly. To support what I have claimed, I must point out

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and

education

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are tied to each other in some ways.

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the bond might not be visible to many people, not only does

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inspire all human beings, it

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awakens their talents and desires.

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, it is not totally wrong if we assume

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as a way of educating.

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, when it comes to

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most people think of it as an academic module, but it is time for all of us to broaden our horizons and include spiritual ways as well as academic ones.

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, statistics show that it is added to the number of kids who choose to go to

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school or like to be an artist in future, day by day, after attending an

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gallery or seeing a play in the theatre.

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, the

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spends lots of

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on unnecessary items

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as luxurious cars for its clerks or giving overrated benefits to some parliament members. None of these expenses

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essential and neither the employees nor the parliament candidates need

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advantages when

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budget

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can be allocated to more important sections. Once

government

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learns how to cut less important expenses short, it can give each section enough amount of

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without worrying about the

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being sufficient and enough. In conclusion, we must admit that reducing the

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budget

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and adding it to

education

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is not the best solution.

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and

education

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are not separable and once you damage one, the other is going to be affected as well. So,

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of that the

government

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can avoid having unimportant expenses and allocate the extra

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to more essential sections.