Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what coule be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

The record of

crimes

has progressively increased each year. In order to curb criminal rates, understanding the

causes

promoting crime is a compulsory aspect, which government should seriously work on it.

This

essay will

firstly

explore the

causes

attributed to the

crimes

including

drugs

and

poverty

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and

secondly

demonstrates some

approach

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to prevent an increase in

this

activity.

First

of all,

the

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,

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the

poverty

of citizens contributes to the significant augmentation of

crimes

.

People

need to find something to eat. Without money and

foods

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food

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, they have to steal, or robber essential elements from others. To illustrate

this

, according to the statistical report, the poor countries

such

as Myanmar, and Cambodia have

a higher criminal cases

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as a result

of a high

rate

of unemployment, and an

economy

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collaspe

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collapse

. The

second

main reason

of

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higher

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crime

rate

is the illegal drug because it can change good

people

to crazy

people

, and do whatever activities to get

drugs

.

For example

, some parents were killed by their

son

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, who

are

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addicted to Heroin.

Therefore

, these mentioned

causes

prompt the social to have more

crimes

. Related to

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aforementioned

aformentioned

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causes

, the solution to

poverty

should be compensated by the government policy, which should increase the job positions, and support their citizens by providing

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welfare.

For instance

, the developed countries in Europe have less

rate

of crime because they have

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good welfare, less

rate

of

unemployee

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unemployed

unemployment

, and education

accessity

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access

.

Secondly

,

government

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the government

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should impose a strong punishment for any case related to

crimes

and

drugs

due to

this

,

people

are afraid of the penalty, and dare not to do criminal activities.

For example

,

people

who are murders or drug sellers should be killed or should stay in the prison forever. As the result, the number of

crimes

will absolutely decrease

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these regulations and punishments. In conclusion, due to

a

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poverty

and illegal

drugs

, the number of

crimes

has been dramatically accrued.

However

, it can be overcome by recommended remedies including imposing

the

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strong punishments, and

increaseing

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increasing

jobs .