Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause a serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living abroad could open a wide range of tempting offers in terms of studying, working and so forth. Notwithstanding, concerns are mounting that speaking a foreign
language
in that country may lead to social as well as practical issues.
This
essay states my perspective, which is that I completely agree with the idea. Without
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native
language
acquisition,
one
is bound to encounter practical problems in many ways.
This
is because foreign
language
creates distances between the outlanders and native, which results in countless awkwardness during
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. Imagine asking for directions in English while being in
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countries, it would be impossible to understand fully for both sides.
Furthermore
, as for the foreigners, when it comes to paperwork, most countries do not have
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for every
announcements
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,
rules
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and
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.
Therefore
,
one
may weather different hinders to live in a nation without comprehending their words.
Additionally
, that lack of knowledge can lead to serious matters involving
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society. Since the outlanders strike the citizens as strangers, it is likely that the non-natives can struggle to assimilate into the community.
Thus
, the unfamiliarity with what the residents are saying aggravates the distant attitudes towards the foreigners.
In other words
, they will end being unable to live in that country given the unwelcoming attitudes towards them. In conclusion, I am
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of the belief that it poses serious problems when not knowing the official
language
of the land that
one
is living in socially and practically.
This
is because it would create distances between the natives and outlanders and
also
hinders
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assimilate
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into the community.
Therefore
,
one
should highly consider learning the
language
in advance in case of man encounters those issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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