Shopping is becoming more and more popular as leisure activity.However,Some people feel the this has positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular ? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society ?

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It has been observed that shopping is more and more famous as a
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,But some of think that it has both productive and unproductive effects
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about the consequences
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shopping. In the current ,lifestyle shopping is a family or friends
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throughout the day,in holidays.Most of the people use to go
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shopping as a hobby since its interesting
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to do which they can join with friends and selecting the most suitable items with their friend's Ideas.In the family ,
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they can discuss with the family members
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the negotiation with the fashion and value of the
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.Both situations with the family or with friends they can get better
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rather than selecting own choices.So shopping is so popular
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these days due to the above reasons. When shopping comes to a leisure
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the waste of the
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is coming higher than the normal shopping.When group shopping
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they use to buy
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of their choice and not much consider the price and its might not essential
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.Most of the time on holidays its become a fashion than both
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and time-wasting
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it comes to the financial issue with their life. Summary of shopping popularity is all about marketing and it's not a real value for the customers in the society.They will spend
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as a fun
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for shopping but they were not getting real importance of
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.When it comes to less demand for shopping
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for buy real value
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for their daily requirement.SO I will suggest less popularity is better for shopping.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure activity
  • consumer culture
  • emotional satisfaction
  • consumerism
  • advertising influence
  • online shopping platforms
  • sense of pleasure
  • social interaction
  • boost the economy
  • compulsive shopping
  • materialism
  • environmental degradation
  • unsustainable demand
  • social inequalities
  • status through possessions
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