Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Many people nowadays think that government should facilitate access to the Internet for free. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the Internet should be free, but some people disagree with
this
view. In this
essay, I will discuss both sides and give reasons for my opinion.
There is
main reasons for my opinion. Change the verb form
are
Firstly
, I really think that all the public poor or rich should have the right to access to
the information and data that they need during the day. Change preposition
apply
For example
, students might not be able to afford the Internet fee so they will miss a lot of opportunities. Secondly
, the network is essencial
at Correct your spelling
essential
this
time, as more of our conversations and communications are via emails or Watsup even the
formal communication. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, the managers are now communicating with their team members using phone applications, this
mean
that the phone should be connected to the website all the time. Change the verb form
means
Finally
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- thirdly
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- although
- even though
- despite
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