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Nowadays people have many consumer goods in their homes such as refrigerator, washing machines. Is it a positive or negative development?

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In
this
 technological era where everything is easily accessible by automation
gadget
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. Some people believe that a lot of individuals now using different electronic equipment in their homey.
This
 essay will discuss both pros and cons of
this
 development, in
further
 ,
discoure
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discourse
 I will support my stand along with listing the outcomes of
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, technology has been advanced now and electronic gadgets made human
life
 easy to live. The primary reason for
this
 belief
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 is that in metro cities both the partners are now working they do not have time to complete daily household chores before going to the office.
Therefore
, the machines
such
 as washing machines,vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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,
dishwasher
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 are blessed to complete their daily
task
 in a short period of time.
For instance
, A report says that now people
life
 has been so easily after the revolution of machines ,it has become easy
life
 for the community now they do not have any tension regarding
household
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 job and they can give more focus on their
task
. Another noteworthy reason could be that in the past women have to do all the
struggle
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 by themselves that are very time consuming like making paste but after the invention of mixter their struggle becomes so easy
In addition
 to
this
, in bygone days the food only longer for 1or 2 days but now it can be store for more days in the refrigerator.
On the other hand
, After the new automation was introduced to
human
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,
life
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 they are now dependent on machinery and they getting obese along with some medical
disease
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.The
first
 foremost reason is that they all trial done by different accessory and folk now have to do less physical effort they are facing problem regarding their health.
For example
 , the survey conducted by WHO says that the
todyas
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today's
today
 generation are not physically fit as
it
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 used to in past and they are now involving in
less
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 physical
task
 .
Nevertheless
, today's generation people are getting obesity issue at a very early age and do not have a fit body to able to do any intensive
task
. In conclusion, the above mentioned contradictory views uphold their own respect and value but I ,
however
,am of the opinion that the public has to understand that their health is affecting just because of less physical job and try to use fewer machinery
appliance
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appliances
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 because they are not good for their health.
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