some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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Noise
can fill your ears and put you in tears.Give relax to your ears from
noise
".Nowadays,
wheather
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whether
strict
laws
control
noise
pollution
has created numerous controversies .some people hold the
believe
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that rules and regulations to
control
excessive
noise
is advantageous.While
other
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others
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hold the view that law enforcement is not beneficial.In my
opinon
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opinion
law has
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grat
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influence
in
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on
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control
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the control
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of
noise
pollution
due to
enviromental
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environmental
and psychological reasons.
First
and foremost ,it has been argued that
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government
governments
goverment
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the goverment
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need to form firm
laws
to govern
noise
pollution
hampering
society
and its members.
Although
potentiaaly
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potentially
potential
negative impact of
laws
must be taken into account.I still reckon that the existence of
laws
has in many ways enormously enriched peoples lives.
for example
"NO HORN"rule around the city area has
progessively
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progressively
contributed
in
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noise
reduction leading to a
peacefull
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peaceful
hea
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sea
;
lthy
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thy
the
they
enviroment
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environment
.
Likewise
,A well known American scientist R.Buckerminter fuller once said ,"
pollution
is nothing but the resources we are not harvesting.we allow them to disperse because we have been ignorant of their value".
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Government
Goverment
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should make regulations
such
as high incentives for
those citizen
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those citizens
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who violate
laws
,settling industrial
area
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areas
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far from living areas.
Moreover
,another factor that should
be consider
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is
psychological
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the psychological
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reason,as far as
society
is concern the ultimate aim of reducing and controlling
noise
pollution
is to improve peoples mental health.
For instance
, A recent article published
on
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by
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scientist
american
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reveald
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revealed
reveals
that about 1.2 billion people around the world
suffers
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mental health issues due to
noise
pollution
leading to problems
such
as depression,headache,irritation,
migrane
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migraine
etc.
Undoubtly
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Undoubtedly
,
this
is a clear indication that
laws
should be implemented to protect people. In conclusion,executive bodies should make strong
laws
related to
noise
pollution
control
in order to lead a safe and healthy
society
.To address
such
issue
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issues
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the
goverment
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government
and
society
should make a concerted effort to find out solutions.
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