Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the current era of globalisation, our world is becoming more and more advanced, thanks to
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state-of-the-art technology.
Therefore
, some people are convinced that it is easy to establish
connection
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a connection
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between individuals and groups with the
help
of
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devices
instead
of using traditional ways
such
as
letters
, paper and pen and I certainly agree with them. With the
help
of
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communication technology and
devices
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it is easier to establish
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and express ourselves. After
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of
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, there have been plenty of ways to communicate
such
as electronic mail, social media, mobile devices, messaging and so on. My friends always have too many applications on their mobile and are always available to respond. While the
letters
will take many days to arrive and
then
the response to that letter would be consuming additional time.
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the above, expressing someone’s emotions is
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of Video calling and makes life easier than earlier. With the
help
of video calling and conferencing the distance is really shortened and the communication can be real-time.
For example
, my parents while being at far place communicate on video calling on
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basis and it makes them satisfy. In conclusion, with the
help
of
internet
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and modern ways of communication, connecting is easy, fast, confirmed, and secure.
Hence
, I would emphasize, that it is not only convenient but quick
also
to use
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modern technology to converse
instead
of sharing
letters
. Due to all these reasons, it can
also
be considered that
letters
are slowly getting obsolete.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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