Some cities create housing for their growing population by providing taller buildings. Other cities create housing by building on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?

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of metropolitan

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requires an adequate housing

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growing

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. Some cities solve the problem with the provision of taller apartment

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. Meanwhile, others plan to expand outward, and

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should be considered as a more optimal one. The essay would provide some

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. Considering the measure of building more high-rise apartment blocks, the drawbacks outweigh the benefits of

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. It is undeniable that taller

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can contain more households at the same given space by having more floors, which saves a large amount of space.

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residential

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occupied means the

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density per square increases, which could lead to some consequences

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traffic jam due to the high commuting rate.

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, when the

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depreciate

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time, it poses several potential problems. One problem is that the

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expenditure of

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is high, which is costly for both

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and tenders.

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, the safety of

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could be threatened if the maintenance is not done properly. Meanwhile, the

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of relocating residential

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to wider

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poses significant advantages.

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, it would decrease the total

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density, which means the traffic density, especially in metropolitan

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reduced.

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,

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in

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area

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enjoy better living conditions in terms of environmental quality with more space and less exposure to air as well as noise pollution.

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notable that

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is only possible if the authorities provide (good) public transportation network and traffic infrastructure so that the commutation needs of the

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are satisfied. In conclusion, while constructing

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building for

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population

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is a reasonable

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for cities with

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land fund, the measure of moving people to wider

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shows more sustainable benefits, but

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require more proper planning.