Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling Is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Nowadays, countries are contributing to
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different kinds of pollution, and one of which
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the most direct to people's daily life is the domestic
garbage
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issue. In order to reduce the amount of
garbage
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, some people say governments must enact
laws
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to mandate citizens to do recycling. In my opinion, I totally agree with
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idea and think that humans are inherently lazy to do so and are aloof from environmental issues.
First
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of all, it is essential to introduce compulsory rules to cut household waste because individuals fare lazy to proactively do
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a thing.
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, before relative rules were formed,
Taiwanese
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created
a
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plenty of
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. They
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throw
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everything, some were already defined as recyclable materials at that time, into rubbish trucks. It was not until the government started to resort to
laws
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to fine those who did not do recycling that the total annual amount of
refure
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pressure
declined. Another reason why only governments can increase recycling is that people less care about environmental issues. In the recent
syrvey
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survey
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, conducted by WHO (World Health Organization), in accordance
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atmospheric pollution, more than half of the respondents had no cognition that approximate
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of air pollution came from local refuse destructor plants.
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a percentage is enough to accelerate global warming, and for
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reason WHO advocates governments to draft
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to
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deal with their domestic
garbage
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problems. In conclusion, as the natural environment is deteriorating along with citizens laziness and indifference, from my point of view it is necessary for
goverments
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governments
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to make
laws
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to constraint domestic waste.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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