Many people believe that the public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their money on expensive hi-tech media,such as software, DVD's or Videos. Do you aree or disagree?

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modern society, is it

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commonly

seen that the

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high technology materials are being used to

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support

the learners in The library

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People have different views of

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place only for books, while others believe that

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media resources are crucial for effective learning. I agree with the idea that

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study materials brings benefits because wieder information and provide

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-learning strategies. It is true that

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media learning

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useful data for students seeking whatever information they require.

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is mean that there is a range of

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pieces of knowledge

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has provided for learners, which

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cannot be

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instituted

by a book.

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instance,

videos

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beneficial for studying

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music,how to sing a song,where a place provide

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of music

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genres

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to browse, which a book cannot support in singing.

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order to improve and

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listening and knowledge that are not exist in a book,

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as Pod-cast or Ted-talk in

videos

have been

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widely

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used by the majority of

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population

populations

across the world. Teaching by using modern media in

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of education is increasing across

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.It is because the modern materials assist teachers to plan teaching

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, which

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their pupils learning development,

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just learning by reading books. Namely,DVDs, the

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source that supported visioning and listening skills as it

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the speech and photo.

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,people who are learning foreign languages used DVDs that had contained in the

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lessons

to practice

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In addition

,it has been proven by a number of pupils that learning through

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is the most effective and

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efficient

approach to improve all aspects of cognitive skills, as it not only boosting

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knowledge by listening, but it is

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enhancing overall skills. To summarize,

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some people thought that, The library should only

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place for books.I strongly believe that the advanced study resources offered

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beneficial as

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provided

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amount of

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knowledge

and a variety of learning

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