At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.

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Nowadays, many countries face the issue of overpopulation. There is no doubt,
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age
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are important to build the nation. Some
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,
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that the
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increased youth population is more effective
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than the older
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This
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essay will explore both opinions and express
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and positive sides.
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, the
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number of younger population
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increased
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following
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decades. It has a number of advantages.
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as youth crowds could work under pressure working environment, they can cope with difficult situations and handle
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heavy equipment rather than
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elder
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,
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people
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could work more effective and efficient manner,
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they have various abilities which are needed
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the present.
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as the level of creativity, new technology, cope with artificial intelligence and many other talents. Younger’s are
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than
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seniors. Companies can select
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employees most suitable to the
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culture and background. Consider with the government they could improve production level and domestic productions, export income as well.
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, the government can reduce expenditures that are under the health care and medications category,
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they can use public money for various projects like
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infrastructures and other public services.
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, on the other ,hand older
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, have more past experience, sense, talents and subject knowledge.
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, especially in the motor mechanic
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older workers know more details regarding the vehicles and spare parts than trainers. One major drawback in their knowledge has been outdated considered with the modern world. In conclusion, without age ,barriers all humans are more valuable,
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every single person has contributed their strength to the
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economy and development.
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introduction
Consider revising your introduction. The thesis statement is weak and does not clearly outline the structure of the essay.
language
There are several issues with grammar and sentence structure throughout the essay. Make sure verbs and subjects agree, and try to reduce the use of comma splices.
argument
Try to explore the negatives of a young population as well, to give more balance to the argument.
structure
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that subsequent sentences relate to this topic. In your second paragraph, the link between the younger population and government spending on health care is unclear.
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