A woman's place is in the home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

For many centuries,

women

needed to stay

home

whereas their men were working. These

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are obviously old-fashioned.The sentence which says that

women

's place is in the

home

is, in my own opinion

complitely

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completely

wrong.

Then

,

this

essay intends to provide arguments to support my

last

idea.

Firstly

,

women

have undergone many stereotypes and inequalities throughout the years. Indeed, they were not given several opportunities

such

as being able to vote or even working in a job.

For instance

,in old society communities were used to teach

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women

to be quiet, nice, to take care of their husband and their children.

Then

, I merely can understand these behaviours during the prehistoric period because men should hunt and looking for food while

women

should take care of children in order to survive. But it was

thousands

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years ago and nowadays going to the supermarket to buy some food has never been so easy.

Hence

, we are not living in the same dangerous world

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before. Indeed today, money is the only thing we need to be able to eat but it has been

such

a huge fight for

women

to have their own money.

Secondly

,

women

have won their

right

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with courage and time. Indeed,

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the beginning, they were not given several opportunities

such

as being able to vote or even working in a job so they were sometimes working behind the name of their

husband

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such

as Marie Curry or Lavoisier. Many strong

women

have fought, and have

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.

For example

, some of them has started to be government secretary and have written laws

such

as the right to vote, the law for the abortion, for the contraception and more... To conclude,

women

's place

are

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not in the kitchen,

inany

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in any

house anymore. All of them are free to stay at

home

if they want to or to work whether they prefer.

Hence

, it has taken so many years to be able to say that

women

's place is not at

home

that