A woman's place is in the home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

For many centuries,

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needed to stay

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whereas their men were working. These

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are obviously old-fashioned.The sentence which says that

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's place is in the

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is, in my own opinion

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wrong.

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,

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essay intends to provide arguments to support my

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idea.

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,

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have undergone many stereotypes and inequalities throughout the years. Indeed, they were not given several opportunities

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as being able to vote or even working in a job.

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,in old society communities were used to teach

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to be quiet, nice, to take care of their husband and their children.

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, I merely can understand these behaviours during the prehistoric period because men should hunt and looking for food while

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should take care of children in order to survive. But it was

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years ago and nowadays going to the supermarket to buy some food has never been so easy.

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, we are not living in the same dangerous world

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before. Indeed today, money is the only thing we need to be able to eat but it has been

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a huge fight for

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to have their own money.

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,

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have won their

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with courage and time. Indeed,

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the beginning, they were not given several opportunities

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as being able to vote or even working in a job so they were sometimes working behind the name of their

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such

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as Marie Curry or Lavoisier. Many strong

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have fought, and have

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.

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, some of them has started to be government secretary and have written laws

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as the right to vote, the law for the abortion, for the contraception and more... To conclude,

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's place

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not in the kitchen,

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house anymore. All of them are free to stay at

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if they want to or to work whether they prefer.

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, it has taken so many years to be able to say that

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's place is not at

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that