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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Climate change is one
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 most debated topics internationally. Every year many
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 collaborate to discuss and find solutions for
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 alarming and unprecedented problem. A few people argue that developed
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 have a greater
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 to tackle
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 situation whereas others believe that developing
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 share equal
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 in handling it. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both views using relevant examples and conclude with my opinion. The opinion that developed
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 have a higher
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 to tackle climate change involves the recognition of the fact that most of the pollutants causing these changes are discharged by many of the developed
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. A recent study has shown that the average carbon footprint of a US citizen is twenty times higher than that of an Asian citizen.
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, developed economies have better resources at their disposal to combat the situation. On the other side, people who believe that developing
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 have the same
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 base their argument on the fact that these
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 have seen the consequences and can steer towards more sustainable solutions from start.
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 will not only help them to get recognized internationally but
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 provide a model for developed
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 to follow and achieve the desired goal. In my opinion, it is a collective
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 of all
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 to protect the environment. Since the profound effects of climate change will impact developing and developed
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 alike. Both developed and developing
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 should play at their strengths and help each other to protect the environment and sustain the beautiful planet for future generations.
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