Many famous players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays marketing has a great role to play in selling the
products
. More and more renowned sportsperson are endorsing different athletic
products
,
definitely
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this
strategy has myriad advantages compared to disadvantages. In
this
essay, I will be illustrating some of the benefits in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, the positives of
this
idea are many
than
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the negative side. Primarily,
well known
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players have a huge fan following which can have a significant impact on sales which is less possible when the product is advertised by a
non- celebrity
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.
Secondly
, some noted athletics do worry about their reputation and are hesitant to advertise fake or
low quality
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products
.
Likewise
, if the goods are genuine,
this
can bring a healthy change in society.
For example
, one
of
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celebrity tennis
player
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players
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in India markets a herbal product which is found to
helpful
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by many people and has ample
of
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good reviews.
Last
but not the least,
plethora
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of youngsters believe them as their mentors or icon and blindly follow their actions and try to imitate them as much as possible.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks too.
Firstly
, some of the sportsmen can be greedy to publish their fake reviews for some brands,
this
can misguide society and can even cause harm to their bodies.
For instance
, there
are
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some sportsperson who advertised protein shakes and many teenagers took them without
doctor's
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consultation.
Moreover
,
this
has even caused them to lose their lives due to renal damage.
Secondly
, some of the manufacturers hike the prices of their
products
after getting
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endorsed by a celebrity.
Nevertheless
, there is always two sides
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a coin. To conclude with my perspective,advantages do outweigh
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the disadvantages. To avoid causing harm to
community
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the community
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, it is the duty of both
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public and celebrities to make their decisions wisely and not misuse their power.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Endorsement
  • Influence
  • Brand ambassador
  • Consumer perception
  • Marketability
  • Publicity
  • Sponsorship
  • Testimonial
  • High-profile
  • Commercialization
  • Athlete's prowess
  • Brand loyalty
  • Impulse purchasing
  • Reputation
  • Scandal
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