Many famous players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays marketing has a great role to play in selling the
products
. More and more renowned sportsperson are endorsing different athletic products
, definitely
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,definitely
this
strategy has myriad advantages compared to disadvantages. In this
essay, I will be illustrating some of the benefits in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, the positives of this
idea are many than
the negative side. Primarily, Correct quantifier usage
more than
well known
players have a huge fan following which can have a significant impact on sales which is less possible when the product is advertised by a Add a hyphen
well-known
non- celebrity
. Correct your spelling
non-celebrity
Secondly
, some noted athletics do worry about their reputation and are hesitant to advertise fake or low quality
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low-quality
products
. Likewise
, if the goods are genuine, this
can bring a healthy change in society. For example
, one of
celebrity tennis Change preposition
apply
player
in India markets a herbal product which is found to Fix the agreement mistake
players
helpful
by many people and has ample Add a missing verb
be helpful
of
good reviews. Change preposition
apply
Last
but not the least, plethora
of youngsters believe them as their mentors or icon and blindly follow their actions and try to imitate them as much as possible.
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a plethora
the plethora
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks too. Firstly
, some of the sportsmen can be greedy to publish their fake reviews for some brands, this
can misguide society and can even cause harm to their bodies. For instance
, there are
some sportsperson who advertised protein shakes and many teenagers took them without Change the verb form
is
doctor's
consultation. Correct article usage
a doctor's
Moreover
, this
has even caused them to lose their lives due to renal damage. Secondly
, some of the manufacturers hike the prices of their products
after getting it
endorsed by a celebrity.
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them
Nevertheless
, there is always two sides of
a coin. To conclude with my perspective,advantages do outweigh Change preposition
to
than
the disadvantages. To avoid causing harm to Change preposition
apply
community
, it is the duty of both Add an article
the community
common
public and celebrities to make their decisions wisely and not misuse their power.Correct article usage
the common
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