Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is often argued that the major issue in our present

environment

is the extinction of some

plants

and

animals

. Others are of the opinion that the

environment

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more serious issues. In

this

essay, I will be discussing both these views and my opinion. On the one hand, the death of some species of

plant

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plants

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and

animal

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animals

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is a cause for concern environmentally because the human race is going

suffer

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greatly.

Plants

and

animals

are used for recreational activities.

In other words

, when these species go extinct, there are less to use for recreational purposes

such

as

,

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the zoo and parks.

Furthermore

, there will not be much to learn and view practically in plant loss,

that is

, gardens are going to have a few

amount

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of

plants

.

For example

, the extinction of dinosaurs has made it difficult to see what it really looks like.

On the other hand

, there are more serious environmental issues to keep the human mind worried.

Although

plants

and

animals

are important in

the

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society, we cannot ignore the damage water and

air

pollution

causes in our

environment

.

Moreover

,

these

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pollution

contaminates the

air

and water which leads to diseases

such

as, cholera, typhoid and

diarrhea

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diarrhoea

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.

For instance

, the

Corona virus

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is airborne,

that is

, it can be transmitted through

air

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the air

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. To conclude,

although

the loss of some

plants

and

animals

are

problems

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problem

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to the

environment

in recent times, I believe that there are more important issues

such

as, water

pollution

and

air

pollution

which can result in the outbreak of diseases.