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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#museums #charge #admission
It cannot be denied that
museums
 are the most outstanding spotlight in historical areas.
However
, there is a controversial question of whether having entrance
fee
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 in some
museums
 while others
not generates
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 more benefits or drawbacks. From my point of
views
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, I believe that people can gain more advantages than disadvantages by doing so. On the on hand, it is obviously observed that a huge amount of budget has been devoted
in
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 constructing
the
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cutting-edge
museums
 with high standard infrastructures in some locations. Investment capital recovery requires to be done when the project
meet
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 the deadlines.
Moreover
, a number of
museums
in
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these days have been denationalized.
As a result
, seeking profit is one of the main investors’ purposes.
By contrast
, some
museums
 are not required to spend a lot of money on the purpose of commerce or advertising.
Hence
, opening free for tourists and local people are rational.
On the other hand
, there is a fact that if we get what we pay for.
Therefore
,
this
 conception literally has
impact
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 on human’s curiosity in
taste
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the taste
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 of using service. Take a historical lover
for
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 example,
certainly
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 he/she
wanders
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 what would be exhibited in the paid-fee
museums
 and what
make
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 it different from unpaid-fee ones.
This
 is a fascinating method of waking up people’s interest.
Moreover
, charging entrance fee in some
museums
 seem to be an incredible technique to identify each of them.
This
 can be a worth note to prepare
budget
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 for people who have an itinerary It is fair to conclude that entrance fee decisions are based on investment expenditure and the purpose of raising visitor’s interest.
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