Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

For the
last
few decades, there are
constantly
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growing rate of
rubbish
and it has become a hot topic. It is evident that
modern
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world has a huge issue
such
as
rubbish
, and has become one of the main issues for the government to tackle
this
problem. The following essay will
firstly
discuss the reason why the
level
of waste still growing at
alarming
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rate and,
secondly
, will provide possible solutions which government can apply
for
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decrease
a
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the
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rubbish
level
. During the past few decades, the Earth has entered a new era of rapid and
potential
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irreversible changes due to
growing
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the growing
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rate of garbage. One of the main reasons why these changes happened
are
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connected to
rising
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the rising
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amount of people around the world. The global population has reached
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seven billion recently, so the amount of trash produced
likewise
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is likewise
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expected to rise.
In addition
, there are manufactures
which
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that
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also
contribute to the total of accumulated waste. While market demand goes higher, there are
manufactures
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who produce more for consumption. Undoubtedly, that one of the main duties of governments
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care about pollution
level
and waste. As the problems are on our doorstep,
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the authority
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authority
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authorities
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have
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to impose new taxes for huge
manufactures
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manufacturers
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.
For instance
, there are few international companies
such
as Coca-Cola, Pepsi and Unilever who
are produce
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are producing
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a high
level
of plastic and not
additionally
taxed.
Also
, particular emphasis should be paid
for
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the recycling industry, authorities must develop
this
industry and make some new ways of recycling without any additional pollution. To conclude, it is fact that population of people will
growing
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be growing
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in the
next
few decades and produce
a more
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more rubbish
a pile of more rubbish
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rubbish
than ever, the government should apply additional measures
for
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prevent
ongoing
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the ongoing
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rising
level
of garbage and save our planet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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