In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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have different views about how well
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a new and rapid
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transportation
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can be valuable . While some argue that it would be better to ameliorate the current
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essay will discuss both views . Personally, I believe that the government should investigate more in the existing ways of
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. There are various reasons why
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believe that authority should invest to have a speedy and reliable train
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, it is obvious that trains used by a large number of passengers and having rapid
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transportation can remarkably reduce traffic congestion.
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communication
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is safer, faster and can connect cities and towns that build a better connection than the conventional
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, according to these
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, the train
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in Morocco
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a useful contribution to improving his overall
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systems between cities and small towns . In spite of these arguments , I believe that investment in
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forms of
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is more
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advantageous
.The strongest reason
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the public
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plays an essential role in interconnecting the different parts of the cities and most
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use
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to travel to different places. Though trains can improve the city
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facilities, it is not an alternative to the existing
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transports.
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why many
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believe that the national budget should be utilised on improving public
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for the sake of better
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for mass
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. In conclusion , despite the diverse benefits of
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transportation
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. I take the view that
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priority should be given to the public forms of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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