You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about – what course you are doing now – why you are not satisfied with that course – what course would you like to change to.

Dear Sir, I am Shreya and my registration number is X34523. Currently, I am a
2nd year
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student of B. Tech(ETC) and M. Tech dual degree program. I am writing
this
letter to request your approval for changing my vertical.
Although
I like my specialization subjects for the technical degree, after completing my internship I realized that communication and business knowledge are critical to
survive
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in the corporate world.
Therefore
, I feel a formal degree in business management would facilitate
enhancement
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of these skills.
Moreover
, I got to know from my seniors that placements are not available in the core companies.
Furthermore
, most of the students are getting jobs in the Information Technology sector.
For example
,
last
year 80% of pupils were recruited by IT companies.
Thus
, I thought of changing due to the fact that soft skills are extremely essential for these companies as
mostly
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people interact with international clients.
Hence
, I would like to change my course to B. Tech(ETC) and MBA. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Shreya
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