some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

Many

people

feel that it would be a great change if large companies and industries move to the regional

areas

outside large urban

centers

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. In my view, I feel there will be more advantages than

that

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of

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disadvantages. In

this

essay, my views with opinions are mentioned below. When an

industry

is moved to the outskirts we can find

major

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difference in the

traffic

system. because, if the industries are placed in the

center

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of the cities

people

who go to work will live in the

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near by

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areas

and

thus

traffic

increases.

For example

, if an

industry

is newly established in the

center

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of the

city

, it provides various job opportunities for different

people

.

Moreover

,

people

who are placed in

this

industry

will seek to live in

the

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nearby

areas

. So as the population density increases

traffic

also

increases.

In addition

,

besides

the increase in

traffic

, there will

also

be an increase in pollution.

This

will have adverse

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affects

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on peoples health living in the urban

areas

. But if an

industry

is placed in the outer sides of urban centres, it will be far away from the majority of the

people

so the risk of health disorders will

be low

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.

For example

, if a cement

industry

is placed at the

center

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of the

city

the byproducts or the harmful gases that are released will

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effect

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peoples lungs. But if

,

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the

industry

is placed far away from the

city

center

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then

it is more likely that

people

who suffer from health issues due to industrial release will be reduced. In conclusion, I can say that the advantages

overweighs

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to disadvantages when

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industry

is placed in the

city

outskirts. So it is always better if large companies and industries are outside the

city

centers

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.