Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. -Apologize for damaging the product. -Explain what happened. -Say how are you going to fix the issue.

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Dear Martha, It's been quite a long since I got in touch with you.

Firstly

, I would like to apologize for not writing to you sooner. The main reason why I was so hesitant was that the scrapbook I borrowed from you to reminisce

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old memories together got destroyed. I am extremely sorry for what happened. I was in a complete fit when it happened that I didn't know how you would react. I was having my evening cup of coffee while going through our old images. I was so excited to show my husband a picture we had clicked on our

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solo trip to Goa, that the coffee spilt over the book.

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I cleaned up the mess over the book quickly, I couldn't help the damage it did to a few photos. Some of them got smudged that you cannot even identify what the picture was all about. I know, me apologizing for it can't undo the damage caused.

However

, I am trying my level best to find my old collection of albums so I could replace the damaged ones.

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, I have given those photographs to a reputed studio nearby. He assured me that he could fix it in a few days time. Hope you will forgive me. Take care Julia

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

216 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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