Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

Art

is an existence that contributes to the country and

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society in different ways.

However

, people who create the

art

, the artists, could not earn enough to live a lavish life due to the inadequate income they make from their occupation. I wholeheartedly believe that governments should take initiatives to support the painters, poets and composers because their creations supplement the country’s image and carry on the tradition to new generations. The work of local creators can represent the native country’s image to the world in several ways.

First

of all, if the paintings, traditional music and

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sculptures are greatly supported, the nation can attract curious international tourists which could give a positive impact on the economy of the country.

For example

, Bagan, the city of ancient

art

forms

such

as pagodas and stupas in Myanmar which was acknowledged by UNESCO as a world heritage site attracts millions of tourists every year.

Secondly

, unless the native presentations of

art

are not suppressed, the makers can enter international

art

exhibitions and earn a chance to portray traditional drawings and carvings. Who can deny

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the fact that

art

is one of the keys to

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the heritage and culture of a nation? Apart from language and local attire,

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future generations can learn

history

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and customs of their hometown through forms of

art

. In the age of

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and globalization, it is crucial to

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on what is believed to be the roots of the tribe to the youths.

Therefore

, the governments should invest in maintaining the

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artworks as well as providing necessary funding and support to the new history in making. To conclude,

art

not only reflects the image but

also

maintain the values of the nationalities.

Hence

, the

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for artists should be set aside from the country’s income.