Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As the world is running towards
developement
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development
day by day it is providing us with a vast number of
choices
and
oppurtunities
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opportunities
. Each and every sector is developing which is are giving us several options to choose
.
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I do agree with the statement that nowadays we are having too many
choices
. My views and agreement
to
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the above statement will be explained with examples in
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essay. The world is globalizing, which is providing us with many
choices
that we haven't seen before.
Moreover
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there are many overseas companies that are
startingup
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starting up
starting
in our lands. The establishment of these companies provides us with many
choices
to choose
.
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For example
, a recent startup company from
australia
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Australia
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that started in
india
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India
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provided 75
precent
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per cent
of
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job vacancies to inland people. Different posts in jobs that are
presant
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present
in that company
is
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leaving the people to choose between the given
choices
. Apart from jobs and vacancies
thare
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there
are
that
are many more areas where we are having too many
choices
. As the world is developing we are getting to know new things and many new gadgets are
also
being invented. So there we are getting a chance to choose and make our life simpler.
For example
, before a decade there are no washing machines, house cleaning gadgets,
smarthome
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smart home
systems and so. With the
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invention
of
these
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we are given a choice to choose so that we can make our day much simpler. So to conclude, as
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time
passesby
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passes by
passersby
new technologies will be invented, new companies will be established that we haven't seen before. These provide us with many
choices
that are
neverseen
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never seen
before. It is always good to be provided with
choices
so that we will have a chance to choose what is right for us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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