Parents often give children what they opt for and do what they like. Is it good for children and what are the consequences when they grow up ?

In society nowadays, there is an increase in the number of over-indulged

children

because many

parents

tend to give their teenagers what they want. From my perspective,

this

is genuinely detrimental to

children

and it may have some potential impacts on

children

and society in the near

future

.

This

might have negative influences on

children

’s

life

and development.

First

of all,

this

may form bad habits and personalities for

children

. If

parents

give their

children

what they ask for, their offspring will keep the thought that it is completely their right to have these items, and in the long term,

this

would make them become selfish and

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.

Second

of all, the

overindulgence

of

parents

may contribute to the loss of

children

’s ability to adapt

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unexpected changes in their lives.

This

is because when

parents

do everything to meet their

children

’s demands, they deter their offspring from sharpening essential skills

such

as

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problem-solving skills,...

Hence

, teenagers are likely to be vulnerable when dealing with just minor problems later in

life

. Due to the

overindulgence

of

parents

,

children

might have to face an array of profound consequences in the

future

.

Firstly

,

this

would lead teenagers to the loss of an attempt to achieve their goal in the

future

.

For instance

, when

children

live under the

overindulgence

of

parents

, they would not understand the value of hard work;

Therefore

, less effort might be put into their work and ultimately, they are not likely to be successful in the

future

.

Secondly

,

this

upbringing method of

parents

would influence the self-awareness of

children

in their process of growing up. They are likely to become too dependent on their mother and father, which in the long run, will weaken their ability of independence, and

as a result

, cause failure in their

future

life

. In a nutshell, it is my opinion that the

overindulgence

of

parents

is truly detrimental for

children

, it can make them lose a range of opportunities in

life

, or even worse, it can ruin a child’s

life

. For

this

reason,

parents

should be aware of the negative effects of

this

upbringing method to ensure their

children

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better

life

when they grow up.