There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

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letter with regard to draw your attention towards unreliability in bus services over the past two weeks. I am Dinesh from sector H. I live just near to sector H bus stop. I am an advocate by profession. I rely on the local bus service to commute to court.

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an issue with route number 21. It

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to arrive at 10:00 AM but

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the past two weeks. Because of

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, I am not able to reach the court premises on time.

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, I am missing the important hearings. I do not have any other options to avail. Could you please consider taking appropriate steps to ensure the correct timings

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route number 21 which is

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unreliable. Please let me know if you require any

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information. Yours faithfully, Dinesh

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Consider including more specific details about the problems with the bus service to offer a more comprehensive understanding.

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Use varied sentence structures to improve readability and engagement of the letter.

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The letter clearly describes the problems being faced with the bus service.

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The tone of the writing is polite and appropriately addresses the manager.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with a greeting, main body, and closing.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph deals with a distinct idea, aiding in overall clarity and organization.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adhering to schedules
inconvenience
daily routine
punctuality
frequency during peak hours
overcrowding
commuters
update system
reliable
maintenance
breakdowns
irregular bus timings
passengers
delays
unreliable
appointments

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