There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this
letter with regard to draw your attention towards unreliability in bus services over the past two weeks.
I am Dinesh from sector H. I live just near to sector H bus stop. I am an advocate by profession. I rely on the local bus service to commute to court. From
the past two weeks, there Change preposition
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is
an issue with route number 21. It Wrong verb form
has been
is suppose
to arrive at 10:00 AM but Change the verb form
is supposed
not
Add a missing verb
has not
the
case Add a missing verb
been the
from
the past two weeks.
Because of Change preposition
for
this
, I am not able to reach the court premises on time. Also
, I am missing the important hearings. I do not have any other options to avail.
Could you please consider taking appropriate steps to ensure the correct timings to be
followedChange the verb form
are
.
Especially, Change the punctuation
?
the
route number 21 which is Correct article usage
apply
most
unreliable.
Please let me know if you require any Correct article usage
the most
further
information.
Yours faithfully,
DineshSubmitted by insighttribez on
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Consider including more specific details about the problems with the bus service to offer a more comprehensive understanding.
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Use varied sentence structures to improve readability and engagement of the letter.
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The letter clearly describes the problems being faced with the bus service.
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The tone of the writing is polite and appropriately addresses the manager.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with a greeting, main body, and closing.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph deals with a distinct idea, aiding in overall clarity and organization.