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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Considered by many that friends who have a point of view like yours are better to choose, but others believe friends should have their own opinion and sometimes argue with them. I am inclined to believe fellows who have their own viewpoint and do not afraid to argue with his friend are valuable. On the one hand, partners who always have the same opinion as yours and agree with you in many cases should be good pals.
Moreover
, they will support you in various circumstances. But, all
people
 are inclined to make mistakes and if
people
 do something wrong,
this
 category of buddy will sustain them and eventually it has the worst aftermath for your friendship. I consider that many
people
 should avoid
this
type
 of person.
On the other hand
, the fellow who has a different viewpoint opposite yours notices your mistakes and issues,
this
 sort of partner deserve respect and you should be close-knit with him.
Also
,
people
 know that
this
type
 of individual hides nothing from his friend. Myriads of
people
 appreciate
this
 feature
such
 as honest and are inclined to believe him or her. From my point of view, I always try to keep much closer
this
type
 of
people
. In a nutshell, the person who always agrees with you has the worst influence on your relationship. Many
people
 understand how much
this
 attitude is harmful and always try to avoid
this
type
 of individual.
Therefore
, the fellow who has a different point of view is more valuable and you always can accept his/her advice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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