Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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People have discrepant views about hosting a global
sport
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event
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. Some think that it is advantageous whereas
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others believe it is a waste of money. Personally, I assume that holding a
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brings more benefits than drawbacks. On one hand, becoming a host puts the country in numerous emergency situations.
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, national infrastructure may not be able to adapt to a sudden rise in
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of people coming for the reason of watching games in person. It pushes the government to invest
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amount of money in renovation so as to expand its capacity.
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, there is a need
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an enormous stadium that can hold up to
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thousand spectators.
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construction would cost a lot of money which could be probably used for other reasonable purposes
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as welfare, public healthcare, schools and so on.
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, a host of an international
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would bring plenty of benefits to its nation.
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and tourism are said to be a winning combination.
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tourism is no longer only a matter of sport but it is now a matter of short touristic stays. It is a desirable opportunity when supporters become tourists and make massive purchases on local goods as well as draw on local services.
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,
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activity promotes not only national tourism but
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economic development accompanied by inflows in a foreign currency.
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, the country seemingly wins a chance to introduce local culture
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to its spectacular attractions to global tourists which
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in longer stay or re-visit in the future. In conclusion, I would strongly believe that holding a global
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is a fascinating idea because it offers more positive changes to the country and brings
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breeze to
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society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic boost
  • infrastructure
  • national pride
  • cultural showcase
  • inspire a generation
  • temporary boost
  • environmental concerns
  • sustainable planning
  • public funds
  • divert resources
  • tourism influx
  • job opportunities
  • sports development
  • public health
  • construction
  • strategic investment
  • global audience
  • hospitality
  • public services
  • cost-benefit analysis
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