Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In
this
modern world, the
technology serves us a lot of benefits and easiness to gain information and for entertainment as well, Correct article usage
apply
for
example
television. Add the comma(s)
,example
However
, many argue that television can ruin the
communication among Correct article usage
apply
friends
and family. Furthermore
, I certainly agree with this
statement and I will provide reasons in this
essay.
Television is one of the most common technology
that everyone can have in their house. The presence of Change to a plural noun
technologies
this
advanced communication device is really beneficial for us. In
some Change preposition
On
occasion
, people spend a lot of Fix the agreement mistake
occasions
time
to watch
Change the verb form
watching
TV
and neglect their surroundings and this
can trigger some problems. For example
, for parents, when their children need helps to do the homework but they do not pay attention to this
condition, children tend to feel they are lack in parent’s affection. As a result
, the children will not gain the best result in their academic score
.
Another one, various programs Fix the agreement mistake
scores
in
Change preposition
on
TV
do give us options to choose which one we want to watch. Nowadays, many TV
programs present the latest films that we can watch in cinema
. Add an article
the cinema
Although
this
condition somehow can be an advantage for our “me time
”, but sometimes we forget to socialize with our friends
and choose to stay at home. For example
, when our friends
invite us to have a coffee in a café, we tend to reject the invitation and prefer to watch TV
instead
of going out. If this
habit continue
to happen, it will upset your friend and your friendship will be destroyed since you both do not have any quality Change the verb form
continues
time
together.
In conclusion, even though TV
can give us a lot
benefits, I agree that Add the preposition
oflot
this
technology can harm the relationship and communication among friends
and family. We have to be more responsible
Replace the word
responsive
to
our choice as we can both maintain our Change preposition
for
time
to socialize and enjoy the
free Change the word
our
time
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