some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to society. others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. discuss what is your opinion?

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There is an argument between
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the community
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community
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that paying
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fine
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is sufficient for a social
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, while few think that
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should participate in other works as well. I believe, paying
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on time is important for the economic growth of the nation but along with that public must have to obey statute, keep the
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clean and make a crime-free
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. In
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I will support my opinion with examples. On the one hand, it is undeniable that paying regular
price
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helps the government to maintain the infrastructure, medicare and public-school system of the country.
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, in Canada
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do not hide their income; it is essential for them to pay property price, food
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and service rate. Legal authorities use these
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to provide complimentary education, free of charge medical care and so on other facilities.
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,
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who are unable to serve the region by
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services
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as police, teacher and doctor, they believe that paying a reasonable amount of price is equal to these duties.
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, the government cannot run the
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without the
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of the residents. If
society
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imitate
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all the precedent and laws, it will support the executive to keep the nation safe and strong.
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, the Australian government enforce laws during the COVID pandemic. Australian citizens follow
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strictly and
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, Australia has the least number of COVID cases, and
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live
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there without any pandemic fear. In conclusion,
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community
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communities
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have different viewpoints regarding helping
society
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.
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, many think that paying duty is one and only responsible for them, obeying the ruling, making no crime and keeping the
enviornment
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environment
clean is the other duty that we have to do. Personally, in my opinion, if population should pay
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as well as doing other chores, makes the
community
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beautiful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental
  • development
  • public services
  • social contract
  • financially support
  • civic responsibility
  • communal activities
  • engaged in the political process
  • advocating
  • enriches
  • actively participate
  • political process
  • less fortunate
  • environmentally responsible
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