some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to society. others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. discuss what is your opinion?

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the community

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community

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communities

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that paying

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fine

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is sufficient for a social

contribution

, while few think that

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should participate in other works as well. I believe, paying

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on time is important for the economic growth of the nation but along with that public must have to obey statute, keep the

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environment

clean and make a crime-free

society

. In

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I will support my opinion with examples. On the one hand, it is undeniable that paying regular

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helps the government to maintain the infrastructure, medicare and public-school system of the country.

For instance

, in Canada

nation

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nations

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do not hide their income; it is essential for them to pay property price, food

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and service rate. Legal authorities use these

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to provide complimentary education, free of charge medical care and so on other facilities.

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who are unable to serve the region by

community

services

such

as police, teacher and doctor, they believe that paying a reasonable amount of price is equal to these duties.

On the other hand

, the government cannot run the

society

without the

contribution

of the residents. If

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imitate

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all the precedent and laws, it will support the executive to keep the nation safe and strong.

For example

, the Australian government enforce laws during the COVID pandemic. Australian citizens follow

those guideline

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that guideline

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strictly and

as a result

, Australia has the least number of COVID cases, and

society

live

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there without any pandemic fear. In conclusion,

community

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have different viewpoints regarding helping

society

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, many think that paying duty is one and only responsible for them, obeying the ruling, making no crime and keeping the

enviornment

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environment

clean is the other duty that we have to do. Personally, in my opinion, if population should pay

contribution

as well as doing other chores, makes the

community

beautiful.

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some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to society. others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. discuss what is your opinion?

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?