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write a composition describing the person you admire from history

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I’ve learnt
History
 for 12 years, and I always think
this
 subject is very boring. But one day, I had learnt about one person in Vietnamese
History
. He has changed my attitude toward
this
 subject. He is the greatest man in our
history
, who wholeheartedly dedicated all his life to the country and
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fight
fighted
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 for the human rights of Vietnamese. His name is Ho Chi Minh as know as President Ho or Uncle Ho – the beloved leader of our country. I would like to call him Uncle Ho because it made me feel like he was one of my family members. His picture is always hanged
in
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 the top of the blackboard in every class so I can clearly see how he look like. Whenever I see his picture, I see a man in his late sixties with his good-natured smile. His smile like
a sunshine
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sunshine
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 brings the bright light, it made me feel happy. He had an oval face with
long
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 goatee in his chin, gentle deep black eyes and thin lips. His
wrinkles
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 skin show how old he was. When he was alive, he
just worn
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 something casual, comfortable even if those clothes were too old. In
History
 lessons, I have been taught about his devoted life. He was a determined person who never gave up and tried hard to find a better way for the country’s future. He was
also
 hard-working and knowledgeable as well, he had gone to France to obtain knowledge and find the key to fight against
th
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