Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down; however, others believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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think that

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are cruel and should be closed down. Others,

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, believe that

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can be useful in protecting wild

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. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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have different views in regard to the roles and responsibilities of

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. While many argue that wild

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would be protected within

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, many disagree with belief that zookeepers are cruel and

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should not exist. From my perspective, I believe that

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are useful in keeping the

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safe,

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mistreating the

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should not be allowed or encouraged. On the one hand,

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can be beneficial to the

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as well as their habitat. From the animal perspective,

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provide the nourishments and living conditions that are suitable for individual species. Many species are endangered

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extinction these days due to the effects of global climate change, and without human help, they would surely struggle to survive in the decades to come.

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,

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take part in saving natural habitats as they help raise

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's awareness about wildlife and the environment. When

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visit

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, they will gain knowledge about how fragile the

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can be in the wild, from that educating themselves about the importance of preserving the earth.

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, I totally agree with closing down

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that allow cruel actions committed against

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as it could cause negative effects to both the

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and the visitors.

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,

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that were mistreated are often in bad health and aggressive towards the visitors and each other. Many zookeepers thought that punishing the

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would make them obey,

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wrong,

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should be treated with kindness and respect.

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, visitors would be affected upon seeing how cruel the

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are being treated. Letting children exposed to

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actions could cause them to apply them to their pets, which would cause mental and physical damage to both children and pets.

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, it is imperative that cruel zookeepers should be punished by the law and

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that neglect the

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should be closed down. In conclusion, I believe

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provide more benefits than drawbacks when it comes to keeping

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safe.

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, mistreating

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should not be allowed to take place, and should never be ignored or neglected.