n today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In today's modern society expenses have increased exponentially, and to meet these needs
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parents
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should engage themselves in work.
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, some believe that it would help in their child's education, while others argue that
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could be detrimental, because of the lack of emotional support a child requires.
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is a debatable topic, and In
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essay, I will put forward my views with a reasonable explanation. The amount to be spent to satisfy our demands have increased significantly in the
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decade. I still remember that when I was a child, my school's fee was just around 1000 rupees a year, but now it has almost increased by hundred of times
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1 lakh a year. It is obvious that now to fulfil these targets, the gross income of a family has to be improved, and I believe that
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can be achieved only if
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parents
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are at work.
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, my uncle who has 2 kids, and who is the only family earner, because of low income, he was not able to send one of his kid to the school. But, when his wife
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started working, they were successful in sending
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of them to the institutes.
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, children lack the emotional support they need if
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their mother and father are working. There are few needs that cannot be fulfilled just by sending them to schools,
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as family bonding and good family dynamics.
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, It is seen that
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who do not spend enough time with their kids had behavioural problems
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as, anger management.
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, my neighbours who have 2 offspring,
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parents
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leave at 7 in the morning and come back at 8pm, and I can clearly visualise those poor toddlers, that how emotionally deprived they are.
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,
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wife and husband should play their own role to complete their needs of a family, I
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believe that they should spend sufficient time with their youngsters to support them emotionally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual-income families
  • competitive world
  • necessary
  • additional income
  • benefit
  • support
  • absence
  • quality of life
  • independent
  • guidance
  • mitigated
  • extended family
  • childcare services
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