n today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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In today's modern society expenses have increased exponentially, and to meet these needs
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The amount to be spent to satisfy our demands have increased significantly in the Linking Words
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decade. I still remember that when I was a child, my school's fee was just around 1000 rupees a year, but now it has almost increased by hundred of times Linking Words
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1 lakh a year. It is obvious that now to fulfil these targets, the gross income of a family has to be improved, and I believe that Linking Words
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leave at 7 in the morning and come back at 8pm, and I can clearly visualise those poor toddlers, that how emotionally deprived they are.
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believe that they should spend sufficient time with their youngsters to support them emotionally.Linking Words
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