Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertising outcomes are part of essential and concern criteria regarding their success to deliver the message
target
users or customers. Fix the infinitive
to target
This
essay will discuss both sides of the argument related the
perception of Change preposition
to the
people
to the advertisement
and also
provide the
evidence Correct article usage
apply
as
why I agree that advertising is still successful to convince the buyers.
On one hand, Add the preposition
toas
people
are bombarded with many ads
on each corner of the road or even all online channels. Don’t you agree that it is really annoying to see unexpected
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an unexpected
the unexpected
banner
or even tons of spammed emails send to our personal email in private time? If the answer is yes, there are Fix the agreement mistake
banners
probabilities
that these advertising methods Fix the agreement mistake
probability
are completely fail
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completely fail
on
convincing Change preposition
in
people
. Then
, the advertising cost is also
an extra cost absorbed in products
we purchased. The higher costs, the higher products
price. In Correct article usage
the products
this
case, people
tend to ignore how impactful advertise
is since anyway it turns to their additional purchasing price.
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advertising
On the other hand
, there are three reasons why I am convinced that advertising are
still successful to persuade Change the verb form
is
people
to spend. Firstly
, a good advertisement
can allure people
emotions and lead them to buy the products
. For example
, nowadays cosmetic products
mostly use gorgeous actors or celebrities as the presenter and successfully attract many females concern about the beauty that hope to be like brand models. Secondly
, ads
could be a good example for users to see how the products
work. For instance
, when people
see TV
show presenting the cleaning equipment, it is a good method to attract attention and imagine as ordinary Correct article usage
a TV
people
could easily use and clean. This
is impactful and inspired people
to have one.
Lastly
, most of the advertisements come with the
prices. Buyers can Correct article usage
apply
also
compare the most reasonable prices or the best products
in the same range especially nowadays the marketing trend is based on real customers review as the ads
method. Hence
, from the points described, the advisements still hit the target buyers.
In summary, I would argue that advertisements are still successful to convince purchaser
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purchasers
at
the right and powerful method. If it could be managed to have the customer perception as it is not too much interrupt the privacy and shown that no extra costs added to the Change preposition
of
products
for extra ads
, the advertisement
is the powerful tools to attract the target customers. The advertisement
will surely achieve its purpose as to persuade people
to spend.Submitted by Ladawan.chot on
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