In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays the
driverless
concept is the leading trend for automobiles development. There are both pros and cons of having
driverless
vehicles
in the years to come. In my
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, I completely agree that
vehicles
with no
driver
needed would be superior. There are several drawbacks
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having
driverless
vehicles
.
Firstly
, considering current technology,
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driverless
cars should require high investment costs since it’s normal for the beginning of product to get in the market.
Then
, regarding
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products, there should be very limited testing
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in
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daily life usage. The limited testing means the higher risks for the passengers to take
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consideration when using.
Lastly
, no
driver
required means some people are going to lose their jobs.
This
will increase the national unemployment rate to even worst.
Conversely
, considering the benefits of the
driverless
trend,
this
can lead to effective
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cost saving as reducing
driver
. To study closer with investment cost in the long term, it’s believed that the savings will exceed the investment costs.
Then
, the passenger could travel at the cheaper fare rate.
Then
, having the program or any equivalent technology that can omit the
driver
,
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could be safer since it could mitigate human errors from driving which may
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in
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accidents
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rate.
Finally
, as the results from having
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program, there would be more precise on the schedule or traffic management since everything could be linked and evaluated as the whole system. In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of
driverless
vehicles
are a lot more valuables.
This
outweighs the possible disadvantages, as long as we could ensure the systems are developed until the safe stage for
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with
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reasonable costs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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