Some people say that the main environmental problem pf our time is the loss of particular plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the world is experiencing many environmental problems causing by human activities. Some

people

believe that losing particular species of

plants

and

animals

is the main

problem

affeting

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affecting

environment while some opponents argue that there are more significant issues of

environment

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.

This

essay will discuss both views of these problems.

To begin

with, the loss of some

plants

and

animals

caused by

deforestiation

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deforestation

is the most important

problem

.

Plants

and

animals

could greatly affect our environment. They are linked directly to the balance of

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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.

For example

, when

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number of trees decrease,

carbondioxcide

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carbon dioxide

(CO2) will increase leading to climate changes. Since photosynthesis of

plants

needs CO2 as their crucial substance, the more shortage of

plants

occours

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occurs

, the more CO2 from

pollution

is not eliminated. Another example is that animal dying is negative for our planet because it can cause other species to die according to

food

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the food

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chain.

For instance

, at the moment, over five

percent

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of insects

declines

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every year.

This

affect

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affects

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directly to the lack of food sources for birds,

mamals

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mammals

, and reptiles. Those

animals

can be

extincted

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extinct

in the future.

However

, some

people

say that there are more environmental issues for

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to concern

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The important one is

pollution

. There are air

pullution

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pollution

from vehicles and toxic chemicals released from factories. To illustrate, toxic chemicals and air

pollution

negatively affect

people

's health. They can cause

a

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respiratory

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disease

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discase

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disease

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and

a

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lung cancer. Another crucial

problemy

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problem

is livestock farming which rapidly rises every year.

This

can cause

a

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climate change because of

metane

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methane

gas releasing from

animals

’ farts. In conclusion, some

people

agree that

lossing

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losing

plants

and

animals

is

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are

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main

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the main

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environmental

problem

needed to be solved whereas others say that other

probles

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problems

such

as

pollution

and farming are more important. I realize that the

problem

that affects

people

's health should be solved immediately and others

which

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do not need

an

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urgent treatment should be taken care

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a long term as well.