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Write an essay to describe Hanoi city in 250 words

#hanoi #city
I am a citizen of Ha
Noi
 – the capital of Vietnam and
also
 the
second
 largest
city
 located near the Red River. Despite the truth that I have been living here for almost 13 years , I am still amazed by the magnificent beauty of the
city
. For that reason, today I’m going to show why I adore it so much. Ha
Noi
 is really crucial for its history: the King once saw a dragon while visiting the capital so he decided to named it ‘ Thang Long’.
Also
, it is located adjacent to Ha Long Bay – which travellers can go there by cars or public transportations. The capital itself has lots of atractions; the famous and stunning Hoan Kiem Lake and Ngoc Son temple, The temple of literature, the colourful porcelain street,.. Sometimes the
city
 is overcrowed , so it might be uncomfortable to stay outside.
However
, if you are used to it, you will be able to find and particpated in lots of traditional activties and games. Like I said before, Ha
Noi
 is a bustling and vibrant
city
. On every weekdays, there will be vehicles flooding the streets, pedestrians running to schools or work under the harsh sunlight. Sometimes if im not in a rush, I would walk on the stone roads and admired my
city
’s beauty: crystals trees hanging by the lake, purple fowers petals laying on the surfaces of the water, smells of frech cut grass and rice flowers lingering in the atmostsphere, and the red wooden bridge at the far distance.
Also
, while emjoying the view, you will meet some women seilling candied fruits for just a dollar, but don’t buy them , they are extremely sweet and sometimes the goods are not fresh. IN conlcusion, Ha
Noi
 is really stunning. The cuisines there are affordable , delicous and the sights are amazing. So I would really recommend to anyone who want to travel to somewhere
that is
 low budget yet still engrossing.
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