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Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #children #homework #school
Many people think that it is important for children to get extra
work
 for home it will help to revise the concept
although
, others believe it is a unnesscery burden for children. In
this
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 we discuss both views and in the
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i
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 give my opinion.
Firstly
, teachers give
homework
 to the student because it is important they connected with studies and it will helpful for
teacher
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the teacher
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 to analyze how much
students
 understand the topic as well as which topic need for revision.
For instance
, so many
students
 have hesitation to ask
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a question
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question
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 and if they don't understand something they do not ask about that owing to shyness or hesitation in
this
 scenario
homework
 helps the teacher for evaluation so she/he will teach that topic again.
Secondly
, it is
aid
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 for make
students
 busy in home and
do
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 some productive
work
.
On the other hand
,
students
 have lots of burdens compared to the past . Now they
more
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have more
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 subjects and they have to do extra-
curriculam
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curriculum
curricular
 activities which
is
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 exhausting for them,
For example
, schools try to make every
students
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student
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 participate in extra-
curriculam
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curricular
curriculum
 activities because they are important for their overall development.
Moreover
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students
also
 do extra study for their weekly tests and monthly tests. It
become
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overburden
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 for them. In my
opinion
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 teacher should give them limited
homework
 and try to give them alternative days
work
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 so that way they are connected to
the
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 studies and
also
 not exhausted
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 the
work
. In conclusion, some amount of
homework
 is definitely beneficial for the academic success of
students
.
However
, teachers need to ensure that they are not burdening
students
 with excessive
work
.
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