Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

It is considered by some that to be successful in
life
it is necessary to have a higher
education
.
However
, there are
people
who do not have a
university
education
but are successful. In my opinion, higher
education
is not the most relevant because many celebrities and businessmen have succeeded in
life
. On the one hand,
education
can help us to triumph in
life
, because there are who have become succeded in
life
being a good professional with an excellent career. Owing to
university
education
, there are succeded scientists and the major discoveries have to be for theirs.
Although
It can be mentioned scientists
such
as Stephen Hawking, Marie
curie
Change the capitalization
Curie
show examples
or Albert Einstein,I believe, is not the most important because there are those who have a great
life
without studies.
On the other hand
, other
people
believe that it to
be need
Change the verb form
need
show examples
special skills to have a
succesful
Correct your spelling
successful
life
and I agree.
Likewise
, there are many
bussiness
Correct your spelling
business
businesses
and big
leader
Fix the agreement mistake
leaders
show examples
succefully
Correct your spelling
successfully
live in the world
withouth
Correct your spelling
without
education
but their skills as
responsability
Correct your spelling
responsibility
and
decissiveness
Correct your spelling
decisiveness
make to have a good
life
.
For instance
, Steve Jobs, Bill Gates and Walt Disney have achieved carry a
succefully
Correct your spelling
successfully
live
Replace the word
life
show examples
without a higher
university
degree. In conclusion, it can be seen that despite there are
people
are
Correct pronoun usage
who are
show examples
succeful
Correct your spelling
successful
with higher studies, there are who can to become succeded
whitout
Correct your spelling
without
university
studies and for
this
reason, I believe is not the most important and
necesary
Correct your spelling
necessary
go to the
university
because if
people
have special skills, they could carry a
succeffully
Correct your spelling
successfully
life
.
Submitted by roberto.carrascopizarro on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • foundation
  • critical thinking
  • innovators
  • vocational training
  • persistence
  • soft skills
  • adaptability
  • non-traditional pathways
  • lifelong learning
  • disparities
What to do next:
Look at other essays: