Some people say that the main environmental problem of out time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

One question that has caused a lot of
controversy
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this
year is that the main environmental problem. In my opinion,
although
some people believe that environmental issues are more important, I believe that the loss of species plants and
animals
are a serious threat to the environment. On the one hand, animal and plant species are dying at a rapid rate. The habitats of the
animals
are being replaced by factories and resorts while some rare and endangered
animals
are hunted for jewellery
such
as elephants and rhinos. for horns. Hunting for these
animals
also
affects other
animals
and habitats.
For example
, when eagles are hunted, nothing will hunt red-eyed sparrows. They will grow at a rapid rate, thereby causing severe damage to organisms and human habitats.
On the other hand
, climate change is happening more and more and its effects are more severe.
This
is caused by many factors
such
as air pollution from vehicle emissions, transformative industrial activities and sea level pollution that has melted the Arctic ice. That will pollute freshwater areas, disrupt and affect the ecological environment, create storms, floods, earthquakes of terrible scale and magnitude, which can have severe impacts and destroy our civilization. When we investigate both
animals
and plants, we
also
destroy the ecosystem and indirectly create natural disasters. In conclusion, when we investigate both
animals
and plants, we
also
destroy the ecosystem and indirectly create natural disasters.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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