Some people say that the main environmental problem of out time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
One question that has caused a lot of
controversy
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controversies
this
year is that the main environmental problem. In my opinion, Linking Words
although
some people believe that environmental issues are more important, I believe that the loss of species plants and Linking Words
animals
are a serious threat to the environment.
On the one hand, animal and plant species are dying at a rapid rate. The habitats of the Use synonyms
animals
are being replaced by factories and resorts while some rare and endangered Use synonyms
animals
are hunted for jewellery Use synonyms
such
as elephants and rhinos. for horns. Hunting for these Linking Words
animals
Use synonyms
also
affects other Linking Words
animals
and habitats. Use synonyms
For example
, when eagles are hunted, nothing will hunt red-eyed sparrows. They will grow at a rapid rate, thereby causing severe damage to organisms and human habitats.
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On the other hand
, climate change is happening more and more and its effects are more severe. Linking Words
This
is caused by many factors Linking Words
such
as air pollution from vehicle emissions, transformative industrial activities and sea level pollution that has melted the Arctic ice. That will pollute freshwater areas, disrupt and affect the ecological environment, create storms, floods, earthquakes of terrible scale and magnitude, which can have severe impacts and destroy our civilization. When we investigate both Linking Words
animals
and plants, we Use synonyms
also
destroy the ecosystem and indirectly create natural disasters.
In conclusion, when we investigate both Linking Words
animals
and plants, we Use synonyms
also
destroy the ecosystem and indirectly create natural disasters.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite