Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with statement?

Most
people
think that in recent times we have
too
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many
choices
. I completely agree that they are plenty
choices
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this days
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. Many
people
believe that in
this
present dispensation we have many
choices
because we have various types of careers courses available to choose from. The number of academic
decision
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a person has to make in present times is very diverse and abundant. More so, the university curriculums provide different options where students can select a trade and specialized
on
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it.
For instance
, in China, over the
last
two
years
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several new programs had been added to the institution brochures,
this
has
open
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a wide range of possibilities for aspiring scholars.
As a result
, enormous development in key areas
have
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been recorded in
the
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society.
Therefore
, colleges with different academic departments stimulate high interest from the public.
Furthermore
, nowadays the number of businesses
people
partake in are so numerous that one can select from different sectors.
However
, in the 1980s there were few businesses
people
get acquainted
to
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leaving them with little or no power to pick their favourite brands.
Nonetheless
, in the twenty-
first
century
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the rate of buying and selling activities is scattered all over social platforms, magazines, newspapers, journals etc.
For example
, in 2019, many European countries saw
a
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high demand in the stocks markets,
increased
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amount of microblogging investors and
also
the purchasing of cryptocurrencies.
Therefore
,
this
modern type of business has given
people
different
option
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options
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in the marketing
industries
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industry
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. In conclusion,
this
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dispensation
people
have the luxury of
choices
in education and
also
in commercial enterprises.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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