Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with statement?
Most
people
think that in recent times we have too
many Add a missing verb
had too
choices
. I completely agree that they are plenty choices
Change preposition
of choices
this days
.
Many Change the determiner
this day
these days
people
believe that in this
present dispensation we have many choices
because we have various types of careers courses available to choose from. The number of academic decision
a person has to make in present times is very diverse and abundant. More so, the university curriculums provide different options where students can select a trade and specialized Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
on
it. Change preposition
in
For instance
, in China, over the last
two years
several new programs had been added to the institution brochures, Add a comma
,years
this
has open
a wide range of possibilities for aspiring scholars. Change the verb form
opened
As a result
, enormous development in key areas have
been recorded in Change the verb form
has
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, colleges with different academic departments stimulate high interest from the public.
Furthermore
, nowadays the number of businesses people
partake in are so numerous that one can select from different sectors. However
, in the 1980s there were few businesses people
get acquainted to
leaving them with little or no power to pick their favourite brands. Change the preposition
with
Nonetheless
, in the twenty-first
century
the rate of buying and selling activities is scattered all over social platforms, magazines, newspapers, journals etc. Add a comma
,century
For example
, in 2019, many European countries saw a
high demand in the stocks markets, Remove the article
apply
increased
amount of microblogging investors and Correct article usage
an increased
also
the purchasing of cryptocurrencies. Therefore
, this
modern type of business has given people
different option
in the marketing Fix the agreement mistake
options
industries
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
industry
this
dispensation Change preposition
in this
people
have the luxury of choices
in education and also
in commercial enterprises.Submitted by Emmanuelodachi on
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